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-Alicia strode across camp and made her way to her team's barracks. Her team was
-one of the better performing ones in the Zhalrami School of Bladecraft. It got
-her to thinking about her father.
+Alicia strode across camp and made her way to her team's barracks. Her team was one of the better performing ones in the Zhalrami School of Bladecraft. It got her to thinking about her father.
 
-Her father had done a lot of the hard work raising her after her mother passed
-from the mage trials. The Zhalrami army was so desperate for spellcasters that
-they had invaded her home town of Letsel and found her mother. Alicia's mother
-Ashe was a natural born mage, absurdly skilled in her craft. She used her talent
-to help her community thrive. Tistus had gotten into a tustle one day and had
-broken his arm. Without Ashe's intervention, Tistus would have easily suffered a
-life of deformity or worse.
+Her father had done a lot of the hard work raising her after her mother passed from the mage trials. The Zhalrami army was so desperate for spellcasters that they had invaded her home town of Letsel and found her mother. Alicia's mother was a natural born mage, absurdly skilled in her craft. She used her talent to help her community thrive. Tistus had gotten into a tustle one day and had broken his arm. Without her mother's intervention, Tistus would have easily suffered a life of deformity or worse.
 
 Alicia paused as she approached her cot. It was exactly as she had left it. The
 corner she left folded was in the same upper left corner that it was always in.

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 # Chapter 2
 
-> _Calm the racing drafthorse of your mind like this: breathe in for four counts, hold for four counts, breathe out for four counts, hold for four counts. Focus on Now, not Then or What Might Be._
+> _Calm the raging whirlwind of your mind like this: breathe in for four counts, hold for four counts, breathe out for four counts, hold for four counts. Focus on Now, not Then or What Might Be._
 
-- Ashe, to Alicia
+- Alicia's Mother

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 Another day at the school of bladecraft. Alicia is suspected by Zekas and blue team. Puri mentions Alicia's fast healing rate in private. Alicia accidentally makes her sword glow in a battle.
 
-- [ ] Blue team dinner involving Blanu seeing Alicia's hands glow after he stabbed her
+- [x] Blue team dinner involving Blanu seeing Alicia's hands glow after he stabbed her
+- [ ] Battle with green team
+  - Zekas is watching Alicia intently
+   - Blanu asks him what he's doing
+   - Zekas mentions that conversation at dinner last night
+   - Blanu asks how he can help
+   - Zekas gives him a spyglass
+   - Blanu holds it backwards and claims it doesn't work
+   - Zekas corrects it
+  - Red team is on defense
+  - 
 - [ ] Dinner with rumors spreading about an affair between Alicia and Zekas,
       Alicia feels embarassed and has to stop themselves from turning invisible.
       Tistus attempts to defend Alicia but has difficulty putting things to

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