From 39cd088fd3f1a3a9277ab3c81f83709a976196d9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Christine Dodrill Date: Wed, 25 Aug 2021 20:05:36 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] more scene 3 Signed-off-by: Christine Dodrill --- plans.md | 19 +++++++++++-------- src/chapter-2/plans.md | 8 +++++--- src/chapter-2/scene-3.md | 10 ++++++++++ 3 files changed, 26 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-) diff --git a/plans.md b/plans.md index 7ca0f20..8dffce2 100644 --- a/plans.md +++ b/plans.md @@ -31,10 +31,10 @@ magical talents with little success. Alicia finds a spiritualist in town and the spiritualist encourages her to use her magic in battle, making her team the cream of the crop (with various social consequences). Alicia gets caught by the schoolmasters and confronted to admit she is a spellcrafter, leading Alicia to -disagree and coin the term "spellblade"; arguing that she has a unique gift and -she wants to see where it will end up. The teachers have never seen this happen -and deliberate before accepting Alicia and encouraging them to continue down -that path. +disagree and mention the term "spellblade"; arguing that she has a unique gift +and she wants to see where it will end up. Kala backs Alicia and reveals xe is a +spellblade too. The teachers have never seen this happen and deliberate before +accepting Alicia and encouraging them to continue down that path. - First battle - Cover the setting @@ -55,10 +55,11 @@ that path. - A battle with green team, they have the high ground. - Zekas watches one of the battles to see if Alicia does anything. Zekas notices a glint in the distance after Alicia gets struck. -- Spiritualist discussions +- The threshold and the mentor - Alicia meets Kala by pure chance in the quad, Kala is tending to a beautiful garden. Discussions about magic happen. Kala is smoking a joint while doing - xer work. Idle mention of the legend of the Spellblade. + xer work. Idle talk about magic and how it can blend with bladecraft, + leaving Alicia to be confused. - Tistus gets mortally wounded in a battle after someone illegally uses a rock. Alicia grabs him and consciously decides to risk healing him. - Flashbacks to her father noticing signs of this happening and teaching her @@ -80,7 +81,9 @@ that path. - Terrible anxiety - Discussions with teachers - Risk of explusion - - Kala steps in and references the Legend of the Spellblade + - Kala steps in and references the face that spellblades aren't as uncommon as + they think and being an asshole about it won't change the face that it + happens, it'll only make it harder for people that are spellblades. - Teacher deliberations - Alicia is crying - Breakthrough experience/rebirth @@ -88,5 +91,5 @@ that path. them into accepting their life scenario. - Alicia is given an option to speak on their behalf before the verdict is given. - - Alicia is the Spellblade. + - Alicia is a spellblade and they are not alone. - Maybe end it here??? diff --git a/src/chapter-2/plans.md b/src/chapter-2/plans.md index b5f3c07..33ec2bd 100644 --- a/src/chapter-2/plans.md +++ b/src/chapter-2/plans.md @@ -1,6 +1,8 @@ # Plans -Another day at the school of bladecraft. Alicia is suspected by Zekas and blue team. Puri mentions Alicia's fast healing rate in private. Alicia accidentally makes her sword glow in a battle. +Another day at the school of bladecraft. Alicia is suspected by Zekas and blue +team. Puri mentions Alicia's fast healing rate in private. Alicia accidentally +makes her sword glow in a battle. - [x] Blue team dinner involving Blanu seeing Alicia's hands glow after he stabbed her - [ ] Battle with green team @@ -11,8 +13,8 @@ Another day at the school of bladecraft. Alicia is suspected by Zekas and blue t - Zekas gives him a spyglass - Blanu holds it backwards and claims it doesn't work - Zekas corrects it - - Red team is on defense - - + - Red team is on a hopeless offense + - Puri and `$RED_TEAM_4` get split up - [ ] Dinner with rumors spreading about an affair between Alicia and Zekas, Alicia feels embarassed and has to stop themselves from turning invisible. Tistus attempts to defend Alicia but has difficulty putting things to diff --git a/src/chapter-2/scene-3.md b/src/chapter-2/scene-3.md index aae026f..27536be 100644 --- a/src/chapter-2/scene-3.md +++ b/src/chapter-2/scene-3.md @@ -62,4 +62,14 @@ took a look down at the field. --- +Alicia looked up the path and stopped to soak in the feeling for a moment. It +was serene. The only sound that you could hear for miles was the sound of the +river in the distance. The forest path ahead curled around a corner, obscured by +trees and brush. Alicia held up a hand, signaling Tistus to wait for a moment. + +Alicia took a moment to smell the environment. She couldn't really pick anything +definite up, the scents of the calm forest were overpowering; however she did +get a faint hint of urine in the distance. Alicia looked back at Tistus and +motioned to follow her. The rest of the team followed behind, staggered a bit to +avoid grouping too tightly.