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# Spellblade Plot
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2021-04-07 16:44:13 -04:00
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2021-04-12 16:40:51 -04:00
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https://www.advancedfictionwriting.com/articles/snowflake-method/
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2021-04-12 10:38:52 -04:00
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## One Sentence
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A woman realizes the gap between two opposites and their place in the middle.
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2021-04-13 07:48:18 -04:00
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## Kick in the Pants
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> something I feel is missing from this set-up is, what is Alicia's overarching
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> motive? What is she doing this for? Why the army recruiting process, and how
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> would an underground school help her further her goals
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>
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> what is it that _moves her_?
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> This whole thing is meant to be an allegory for coming out as nonbinary. Her
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> goal is to not be so afraid of herself.
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2021-04-18 15:55:22 -04:00
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## Cover Idea
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Use the palette of the nonbinary pride flag, yellow sky, white clouds, Alicia
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in purple holding her locus to the sky, black ground w/ yellow highlights.
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2021-04-12 10:38:52 -04:00
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## One Paragraph
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Alicia is a student at the Zhalram School of Bladecraft, one of two schools
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owned by a shadowy organization that oversees the Zhalrami army recruiting
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2021-04-19 15:30:51 -04:00
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process. Alicia is troubled in her schooling and tries to suppress her innate
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magical talents with little success. Alicia finds a spiritualist in town and the
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spiritualist encourages her to use her magic in battle, making her team the
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cream of the crop (with various social consequences). Alicia gets caught by the
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schoolmasters and confronted to admit she is a spellcrafter, leading Alicia to
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2021-08-25 20:05:36 -04:00
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disagree and mention the term "spellblade"; arguing that she has a unique gift
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and she wants to see where it will end up. Kala backs Alicia and reveals xe is a
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spellblade too. The teachers have never seen this happen and deliberate before
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accepting Alicia and encouraging them to continue down that path.
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2021-04-19 15:30:51 -04:00
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- First battle
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2021-04-23 07:34:06 -04:00
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- Cover the setting
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- Introduce the bladecraft school
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- Introduce spellcraft and frame it as an "other"
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- Introduce Alicia undergoing a magical awakening
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- Accidentally uses powers on the field
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2021-04-23 08:25:15 -04:00
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- Leads to victory
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- Puts herself in the line of fire
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- Tongue-lashing for the absurdly crazy strategy
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- Meal hall
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- Bed, idle thoughts about her magic
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2021-08-04 14:06:59 -04:00
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- Refusal of the Call
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- Zekas is told about Alicia's glowing hands and suspiciously fast healing.
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He keeps a closer eye on her.
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- Alicia decides to shelve the issue of her magic and completely ignore it.
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Discusses dream with Tistus.
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- A battle with green team, they have the high ground.
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- Zekas watches one of the battles to see if Alicia does anything. Zekas
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notices a glint in the distance after Alicia gets struck.
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- The threshold and the mentor
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- Alicia meets Kala by pure chance in the quad, Kala is tending to a beautiful
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garden. Discussions about magic happen. Kala is smoking a joint while doing
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xer work. Idle talk about magic and how it can blend with bladecraft,
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leaving Alicia to be confused.
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- Tistus gets mortally wounded in a battle after someone illegally uses a rock.
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Alicia grabs him and consciously decides to risk healing him.
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- Flashbacks to her father noticing signs of this happening and teaching her
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how to suppress her gift
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- The magical side would effectively kidnap her from a young age and her
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father wanted to be with Alicia as a kid, the Zhalrami army desperately
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needs spellcrafters for battle with Usill.
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- Father died in the aftermath of an avalanche.
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- Alicia enrolled in the bladecraft school to get away from home because it
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reminded her of her dad.
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- Tistus is saved, the enemy doesn't know they made that wound.
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- The threshold is crossed.
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- Tistus and Alicia talk in secret about this.
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- Magic tutoring from Kala
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- Alicia goes to Kala in secret to learn healing magic from Kala. Kala is
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confused at first, but things add up and xe becomes more than happy to mentor
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her.
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- Getting Caught
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- Terrible anxiety
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- Discussions with teachers
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- Risk of explusion
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- Kala steps in and references the face that spellblades aren't as uncommon as
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they think and being an asshole about it won't change the face that it
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happens, it'll only make it harder for people that are spellblades.
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2021-08-04 14:06:59 -04:00
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- Teacher deliberations
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- Alicia is crying
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- Breakthrough experience/rebirth
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- Alicia has a horriffic nightmare during the deliberations and that pushes
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them into accepting their life scenario.
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- Alicia is given an option to speak on their behalf before the verdict is
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given.
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- Alicia is a spellblade and they are not alone.
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2021-08-06 19:05:40 -04:00
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- Maybe end it here???
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